WALT: Use descriptive language to create a picture for the reader.
On the first phase of the moon I see pitch black sky and sparkling stars.
Zach
In the second phase I can see a half eaten round cheese.
Jolie
In the third phase of the moon I see a half ice blue soccer ball.
Hopper
On the fourth phase of the moon I see the top of a white bald head.
Cate
On the fifth phase of the moon I see a beautiful netball hoop shimmering in the sky.
Charlotte F
In the sixth phase of the moon I see a soccer ball that's a quarter flat.
Declan
In the seventh phase of the moon is like the other half of a rotten blueberry.
Liberty
In the eighth phase of the moon I see an old rusty fishing hook.
Ruby
In the ninth phase of the moon I see a few candles twinkling in the light of the crystal sky.
Hannah
That is beautiful descriptive and imaginative language!! Tonight when I look up at the night sky I will think of all your lovely writing! Thank you.
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