Matariki Stories Retold by Room 23

WALT: Structure our writing with a beginning, middle and end.

Phases of the Moon

WALT: Use descriptive language to create a picture for the reader.

On the first phase of the moon I see pitch black sky and sparkling stars.
Zach
In the second phase I can see a half eaten round cheese.
Jolie
In the third phase of the moon I see a half ice blue soccer ball.
Hopper
On the fourth phase of the moon I see the top of a white bald head.
Cate
On the fifth phase of the moon I see a beautiful netball hoop shimmering in the sky.
Charlotte F
In the sixth phase of the moon I see a soccer ball that's a quarter flat.
Declan
In the seventh phase of the moon is like the other half of a rotten blueberry.
Liberty
In the eighth phase of the moon I see an old rusty fishing hook.
Ruby
In the ninth phase of the moon I see a few candles twinkling in the light of the crystal sky.
Hannah

Dialogue Sentences

WALT: Add dialogue to our writing

"Ahhhhhhh!" screamed Mustafa as he looked at adorable puppies and nearly fainted because they were going through x-ray machines.
Harriet

She heard a little giggle and after that an "aaaaaaoooooooo".
Hannah

During the soccer game Charlotte went well as her team mates screamed "Shoot, shoot, shoot!". Charlotte kicked and....SCORE!
Charlotte.F

"Dad look at the full moon it's orange. Dad, dad where are you? Ahhhhhhhhh!"
Madhav

As Nina looked out the window she screamed "There's a man with something in his hand at the window!".
Cate

"Hey Dom, are you sure we are gonna be ok?" whispered Tate.
Zach

While Caroline was sleeping her sister Annie screamed "Ahhhhhhhh, ahhhhhhh a werewolf!". As Annie screamed the clock struck 1.

Escape Pig- Rayan

Escape pig

A pig named Wilbur escaped from Mr Zuckerman”s

Farm on Thursday the 5^th of Aprill 199l.

When the animals found out that he escaped

they told him what to do.  Wilbur  could

not do it all because he can”t run up and

down hill. Then Mr Zuckerman came with

a bucket of slops. The slops were warm milk

potato skins and  Wilbur followed him back inside.

Communication- Mustafa

3.6.14

Mustafa

Communication

I think communication is talking in like sign language and just talking also like letters you could phone them sing a song. You need to communicate with blue prints, Facebook, twitter.    

Nile Croc- Madhav

Nile crock

Intelligent

Lowland Africa

Eyesight is great

Crocodilian

Reptilian

Overpowered

Crocodile

Interesting

Dangers

Interesting

Lizard

Eat

Thorny Devils- Lucy

t  rouble

h  ungry

o  ld

r  eptiles

n  aughty

y  oung

d  evils

e  vil

v  icious

i  ncredible

l  ittle

s  smart

By Lucy

Shrek- Charlotte

Shrek

I think Shrek is a goodie because he is a hero and saved princess Fiona in the first movie. He cares for her and shares his things with her. He has been misguided because he looks like a scary ogre but inside he is actually really kind-hearted and nice. He is hilarious and makes friends to anyone who is nice to him and takes a lot of care to his friend donkey. Donkey wakes him up with a He-Haw every morning and is very good at feeding him every day.